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:iconimhappyplz:

Then he kills me D:
Or maybe not... I dunno..its hard to tell coz he's so random :XD:

Crits would be good *squirms in chair* coz I dont usually draw manly men an he looks so under weight in my style.
He's usually way more muscly an buff ^^;
Buuut I like it none the less ^^
Tried diff style of shading...

Deadpool (c) Marvel
Art/ Deezmo (c) Me

Critiques


:iconkraden:
The pose and visual weight of the piece works well, having a tail actually balances it quite well, but the red of his costume and the surprise balloon lead the viewers eye to the left, which is good.
However the shading compared to the background is too dark, and maks the characters hard to see. A line work should either be blended into the character, by coloring it, removed entirely, or left solid so the extremities are easily defined.
I like the way you did her right foot, the claw design is quite funky, and works like a little Easter egg to the whole anthro. The overall coloring is good too, although her eye could be a little larger\whiter, to help make it ';pop' with happy and squee.
Overall, a very nicely executed and colored piece. As a general comment, just looking at this from a distance makes me wanna open it up and see what you're on about, so congrats on that, it's the main point of any artwork, to draw people in :D
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:iconoverlord-rodrod:
Incredible work!

I think he looks just fine in your style. >:3

Love your 'sona!
:icondragonsmoke:
Thankies x3

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:iconservina:
nice one :3

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He looks fine to me not under weight, normal sized. He may be more muscley and bulky, but he looks fine to me. I don't really like huge muscles though.

I feel sorry for the characters you obsess over, they will always end up dieing from glompage.

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:icondragonsmoke:
Thanx ;D

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:icondragonsmoke:
Ah thats good to know, thankyou :3

Yeah..plus no one really knows who's next :XD:

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:icongiar3579hierarchy:
Awesome artwork.The hair are very cool...Keep it up...

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TwT oh this style of shading is looking super good too! He looks fine to me! you got the detailed ab and shoulder muscles! I think it's really great! I'm stealing her bracelets and earings and shirt from that last picture :heart:

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